This is great. The timing with everything was perfect. You did an amazing job with the characters changing positions. Other all, awesome. I'm not sure if I'm scared, amused, or just plain disturbed.
Very good, exspcially for your first flash! You did a very good job with syncing up the dances and changing camera angles! Next time, add a preloader, because it would not play immediatly after pressing the play button. Also, the sprites would sometimes 'slide' in place, make sure the feet are lined up between frames. Other than that, very cool!
well it may be my 1st "flash" but i made 2 other shows and posted it here so thats how i knew about this, sadly i used movie maker to make it and i did not know how crappy it looks on newgrounds but its still there if you want to see
As for the preloader, when i tryed to get it i puted it in my film and the vid went by really fast!!! sory for keeping you but it was the only way i knew how to make it work...
I have to say, when I first saw this I thought it was just going to be some mindless robot war, but how wrong was my asumption! This has beautful art, wimsical animation, a well-written story and one of the greatest soundtracks I've ever heard! You know an animation is great if even the credits are fun to watch! The one very small issue that I found is that I couldn't tell if the grandpa was a wise, mean, or crazy old man (I guess you were going for slightly crazy though). Very, very good job. I look forward to the sequel!
This game is terrific. The concept, the art, and everything. However, I think there's a few things that could use improvement:
- The art is great, but the colors are a bit much. It's kind of hard to read the text.
- Some collision is a bit off. When you run into an arrow, it will push you to the side a bit, and enemies can hit you when you don't touch them.
- The 'sprite' could use some aligning with the animation (his legs don't move at the right pace).
This game has some serious potential. I would consider making a sequel or v2 in the future if I were you!
-Yeah I should have added more contrast to the text..
-Because of the lack of my coding skills it way a positioning error I tried to fix. I could have but it would have lagged.
-I'm not used to animating at a top down perspective. Normally you would be right but if you saw the charecter design you would know he is in no way human. But I know what you mean.
Thanks for the review.
This was a tutorial game, if I remember correct. Can't really judge much since all the art and code is pre-made... still, it's good to see some practice. You did a nice job putting it all together, but the game itself feels quite shallow. Good luck with future projects and I hope to see what you can come up with alone!
Very, very well done. The controls felt great, and I found no problems. Although, admittedly, it wasn't much of a game. But, I think you were focusing more on the artistic side of thing rather than a challenging game. Very cute and original concept, overall.
Wow. This is beautiful. Great music gives its listeners images in their minds, and you've accomplished that. The song is somewhat sad, yet hopeful. Dark, yet soothing. Scary, yet magical. Very good job making it sound all 'together' even though it contains so many emotions. Amazing job.
Very good beat, and an amazing build up. It reminds me of that classic 90s vibes. Great job!
I hate it...
... On opposite day! Very awesome job, it sounds just as a horror piece should! It's mysterious, suspenceful, and just all around awesome.
thanks took me a while. reminds me of castlevania
Crazy stuff, man.
Wow. This is very different! I like it!
The face is well drawn, the effects are well done, and the colors are sweet!
Very creative job with designing these! They look like nothing I've seen before!
Love it. Great job coloring, drawing, and all the other junk involved with making this!
Can't argue with that!
Very neat job with this "portrait". You did a terrific job with the facial structure, background, and coloring! The body seems a bit off proportions at some parts (the hands), but I'm not sure if that's just your style or not).
Anyway, great job!
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