VisionPie's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Osh & Pokochow]

Good!

Really nice, I like you're sketchy-painty style. Only complaints is that Pokochow is sort of floating on Osh's shoulder and that I'm now going to have nightmares. Other than that, awesome!

[Me Sailing :3]

Cool!

Fun sketchy-drawing! I like your style of art! THe seagul of the right looks a bit strange, but I still love this piece!

Pinoy4Life96 responds:

Thank you!

Yes, the seagull looks rather funky, doesn't it?
I'm starting to make flash movies, and I'm going to try to continue posting 1 piece every week.

[Mario in Action]

Pretty Decent...

This is a hard drawing to put a score on. The face is excellent, and very expressive, and the background looks good too. A bit plain, but good. The only problem is that his body is off shape/weird. It's too stiff, I suppose. Don't be afraid to round those edges and draw lines multiple times!
- To shade, start dark and slowly loosen your grip so it gradually darkens (I have problems with shading, too at times).
Very good work, for the most part!

ChandlerThompson responds:

I appreciate the help. Thanks for the tip on curving the lines, I completely understand how odd the body looks. Thanks for the compliment on the face as well.

[Süet The Barachaek Goblin]

Woah!

I love it! The texture of the coloring is really well done!

Sandling responds:

Oh thanks dude ^ ^.

[I see you...]

And I see YOU!

Wow, this is great! Very cute. I kind oflike the 'mess up' on the right side, because it makes the guy look like he's saying 'What the heck?'. Perhaps he's spying on someone at camp doing a rain dance or something. XD The only problem is that the ground and leaf pile don't really match up. Awesome work anyway!

[Wagga-chomp]

Wakka, wakka, BARK BARK!!

Haha, clever! I would so buy a shirt like this.

moonhitler responds:

Awesome!

[The Jimtopia Cast]

Cool!

Awesome job, Jimtopia is one of my series on NG. My only problem with this picture is that the character parts just seem a tad out of shape. Good job though! Ever thought about using this sort of style for a toon? Maybe a Jim and Pals about drawing...

Jimtopia responds:

I have thought about it, it just takes forever to draw all the characters like this, when you're so used to seeing all perfect lines for the characters, it's hard to draw them freehand. Thanks for the review though, glad you enjoyed it.