This is great. The timing with everything was perfect. You did an amazing job with the characters changing positions. Other all, awesome. I'm not sure if I'm scared, amused, or just plain disturbed.
Very good, exspcially for your first flash! You did a very good job with syncing up the dances and changing camera angles! Next time, add a preloader, because it would not play immediatly after pressing the play button. Also, the sprites would sometimes 'slide' in place, make sure the feet are lined up between frames. Other than that, very cool!
well it may be my 1st "flash" but i made 2 other shows and posted it here so thats how i knew about this, sadly i used movie maker to make it and i did not know how crappy it looks on newgrounds but its still there if you want to see
As for the preloader, when i tryed to get it i puted it in my film and the vid went by really fast!!! sory for keeping you but it was the only way i knew how to make it work...
I have to say, when I first saw this I thought it was just going to be some mindless robot war, but how wrong was my asumption! This has beautful art, wimsical animation, a well-written story and one of the greatest soundtracks I've ever heard! You know an animation is great if even the credits are fun to watch! The one very small issue that I found is that I couldn't tell if the grandpa was a wise, mean, or crazy old man (I guess you were going for slightly crazy though). Very, very good job. I look forward to the sequel!
Ohmigosh it's Jim! In read-drawn frame-by-frame syle! Really awesome stuff. I know frame-by-frame takes a long time and a lot of work, but I have to say it looks perfect on Jim (his simplistic syle looks great with this kind of animation). Awesome, funny, a bit load, but overall, great. 5/5
Thanks man, you actually kinda inspired this idea with your review.
Can't wait to see more!
Very good job, exspecially with the writting! Who does your voice acting! They did a good job!
Thankyou! I added my voice actors to my description above, though you'll need to take out the extra spaces to get the url to work. They are all very good friends of mine, I'm sure they would appreciate your compliment. <3
The plot was a bit confusing, but a cute concept. Keep working on the animation and art. Good job overall!
Thnx. The art will improve, but over time.
Very beautiful concept and well executed. Great job.
Uh... I don't know what to say. Quite an overdramatic fellow, isn't he? Perhaps when your animation skills improve you could turn this into a series. It's a little too strange for my taste, but I'm sure there are plenty of people who would like it. Good luck!
FIrst off, it took WAY too long to load for such a short animation (why did you use the madness day preloader?). The special effects were good... but everything else just felt like anyother stick flash...
One of the best
Very good job to everyone who worked on this! The series was just amazing. I'm speechless.
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