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Interesting

Interesting design. The panada looks really cool and funny. And the logo is nice, too! Nice job with the paint!

Gi-go responds:

Thank you!

Haha, nice.

This is pretty cool, I like how the shading is different from the head to the body. Your 'style' is really neat with this peice: simple yet detailed. The body looks a bit odd in places, but overall this is great!

Y2k4ever responds:

i and my animator thank u :3

Funny!

I actually got a chuckle out of this one! Great job!

The proportions are a bit off at some points and there are some strange angles (and your english could use some work, but it's not your first language so I won't count you down for that), but your style is really cool and the shading and coloring is terrific.

Anyway, well done and I can't wait to see more comics!

bocodamondo responds:

thanks and sry
i dont upload my other comics at newgrounds :c
you most check out my website or sheezyart , deviantart

Man these are really nice!

I love your 'doodlistic' style a lot (yes, doodlistic, it's now a word). There are tons of different scenes going on yet they all seem to belong together. I would love to see what all of them looked like colored!
My only critique is that Angry Faic could be a bit more 'round' and that the anatomy looks a bit 'stiff' (the crasher in the left-hand corner might look better if his arm was bent more).
Really though, this is quite nice. I look forward to more!

Urza12 responds:

thanks a ton dude for your support, and this review is actually extremely helpful to me. I am not completely good with circles, or anything round for that matter but i can try to be. As for the stiffness of the drawing, well, to be honest i was going to throw this out because of the way that knight looked. Ussually more then 60% of my drawings have an odly shaped or dimented figure (like that knigiht) and this was one of the extremely lucky drawings that i decided to keep and upload. But again, thanks for the support dude!

Cool!

These characters would indeed make terrific comic characters. They have a lot of motion to them, and, like a good cartoon character, have a really defined look that can't be confused with anything else. The Wrangler looks exspecially cool, I wouldn't mind seeing him from different angles.
Perhaps work more on definate proportions, the 2-headed gremlin's arms are a bit off from eachother, for example. Other than that, it looks really great!

Urza12 responds:

Glad you like it :)
Yea, porportions are my worst enemy. It is something i am trying to get better at, and when i draw my pieces i come across things that i mess up on, or accidentally do something that almost destroys the piece. When i do these mistakes, i try and make it hard for people to see them. But good observers like you still manage to find them.

Further more, i will try hard to avoid these porportional catastrophes.
Thanks for the advice as always e-yeah!

Game Over

Man do I hate these, always won me a game over when I was a kid...

This is awesome, I like your portrayal of it. The cigar and 'beefy' arms are a perfect match for Mr. Please-Don't-Kill-Me-I-Only-Have-One-Life-Left. I like how instead of giving it human-colored arms, they look more metallic. The shading and details are simplistic, but I feel it adds more style to it. Great job!

bigjonny13 responds:

Lol, back in my day, you had to stay sharp, fast hands on the controller, dodging everything that came at you. I remember vividly on level in Super Mario World where every now and then about 20 bullet bills shoot at you from all 4 sides of the screen. Now dodging that was a pain in the ass.

Nice!

Pretty good, exspecially for your first digital painting! What I really like is the grass, which actually looks hand painted! The moon also has a nice glowy-look to it. However, try to make it look 'all together' when it comes to the shading. While I don't always reccomend this, I think a little bit of mixing and smearing would be good with this picture when it comes to getting a paint-effect. Good luck with future tries at it, and good job!

acedareaper responds:

thanks ill try that

Woah...

Very good optical illusion. It makes my head hurt! Haha.

Anyway, this is really well done. However, the 'focal point' is off center, which is a bit distracting.

Still, really good job!

piconjorules1234 responds:

thx i noticed the center was slightly off but i put so much work into it i was worn out i hoped no1 wood notice thx 4 da review

Wow

This is great! Very, very funny! I did not see that coming, the timing was perfect! Awesome job, per usual.

Sethdd responds:

thanks very much

D'AWWW!

So cute!

Very nice drawing! I love the way you drew it all fluffy and furry, the eyes look amazing too! My only critque is that it's lower body seems a bit big. Still awesome, very awesome, job!

(It's SO CUTE!!)

drop-of-water responds:

Thank you It makes me happy that you like it :D and I agree that the bottom looks a bit large :P

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